演讲稿-868字作文

Hello!My name is Gan xirui My English name is Libby.I Meghit. I come from Ma Jiang xing shan primary school.I׳m in Class Two Grade five.Im a Chinese boy. I l ike English very much . There are three people in my family. They are my father my mother and I\'\'I have a happy family.I love my family.Now l\'\'ll talk about my hometown to you.My hometown is in Ma jiang. lt\'\'s a beautiful place. lt has many tall buildings and wide streets . There are trees and fowers everywhere. There is a Qing Shui Jiang River and Shui Luo Tan Wany people come to visit them every year. The people here are very friendly and helpful l love my hometown very muchtoo.Weicome to my hometown—ma jiang gui zhou! l think you\'\'ll like it!

名师点评：小作者这篇英语作文总体上写得还是不错的，小作者在文中介绍了自己、自己的家人和家乡，让读者对小作者有了一些了解。小作者还突出了家庭的温馨和家乡人民的友善，可见小作者的英语表达能力还是不错的。不过文章也有几处笔误，另外，有些标点不规范，小作者还要更仔细一些。

“IlikeEnglishverymuch”改为“IlikeEnglishverymuch”。“Wanypeoplecometovisitthemeveryyear”中的“Wany”改为“Many”。“Weicometomyhometown”中的“Weicome”改为“Welcome”。

另外，既然是演讲稿，那么演讲的主题是什么呢？如果能给文章拟个题目就比较完整了。